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by Alicia Lynn Grega

Revising Cressida with Google’s Notebook LM

After seeing the Scranton Shakespeare production of Troilus and Cressida in summer 2019, I began research to support a (feminist) revisionist (live theatre) story about Cressida / Bresis and women trafficked as slaves during the Trojan War. In Chaucer’s version of the Troilus and Cressida story, she is degraded for her disloyalty to Troilus and for her fickle, inconstant character, in general. It’s not a virtuous way for a woman of that time to behave. The readership knows to judge her. Shakespeare plays with moral questions of wartime but doesn’t free Cressida from “slut shaming.”

Peter Donat (left) and Martha Henry in Shakespeare's Troilus and Cressida at the Stratford Festival in Ontario, Canada, 1963.

Unfortunately, after finishing grad school that same summer, my work schedule grew and grew to the scale that I haven’t had much time to devote to this project since first conceiving of its potential.

Among the seven classes I am teaching this semester are an introductory course in Media Writing and Writing for Social Media. Knowing the momentous impact AI continues to have on the media industry, it would disadvantage my students were I not to learn as much as I can first-hand about the potential dangers and benefits of the uncanny elephant in the room. I have my own moral qualms about typing a single word into any of these digital communications platforms these days but … this is the world we are living in today. Is AI going to go away if we ignore it? Can we reject this technology and still expect to earn a living? How long will it take to build a whole new unplugged underground? Are enough of us willing to confront the digital revolution with a new world order? Perhaps.

Like many people, I’ve been captivated with what Google’s Notebook LM can do after hearing the “audio overview” sample on Hard Fork.

While doing research for my class this morning, I was inspired to see what Notebook LM might do with my work on the Cressida Project so far. I’ve accumulated documents including literary research papers, source texts, blog posts and my own notes and creative ideas based on the conviction that we must retell Cressida’s story because she was a trafficked woman, a sex slave traded as a win or loss in a foolishly deadly war waged for no good reason.

Troilus and Cressida in 2012, a collaboration between The Wooster Group and the RSC as part of the World Shakespeare Festival. Photo by Hugo Glendinning © RSC.

After a productive chat and a pretty fantastic “audio overview” was generated, I knew I had to share the results. While these results are AI-generated, they feel very personal and specific to my ideas and viewpoint. I feel a sense of pride in these results even though AI does a lot of heavy lifting here it couldn’t have made sense of my research unless there was something solid here. I fed it 27 sources to support my position and this LM makes it sound like my concept is worth pursuing. I feel re-inspired to finish the work I’ve begun.

The remainder of this post is the content generated by Notebook LM after our detailed conversation. I find it interesting that while the “Audio Overview” leaves out any specific mention of my plans for the revisionist play, the WordPress post I asked Notebook to write did not shy away from my original script in progress. The working title is “Whore Criseyde” which I know is just awful. I’ll change it later LOL.

*The works cited page that supports these footnotes is based on my uploaded sources but also complimented to texts beyond my current download folder. I’m not going to include it here but don’t hesitate to contact me if you are curious.

First: A link to the Audio Overview to help separate the AI that follows from the Alicia who wrote the first half of this post herself.

Audio Overview Logline: “In a reimagining of Shakespeare’s Troilus and Cressida, a woman’s ‘betrayal’ becomes a desperate act of survival in a world where she is both a commodity and a scapegoat for the follies of men.”

Cameron McNary (left) as Troilus and Tyler Layton as Cressida in Troilus and Cressida, 1999. Utah Shakespeare Festival.

WordPress post I asked Notebook LM to write:

“My current project is a deep dive into the complexities of Shakespeare’s Troilus and Cressida, but it’s not your typical retelling. I’m not interested in simply rehashing the old story of a ‘true’ lover and a ‘false’ maiden. Instead, I want to reimagine Cressida’s story through a feminist lens, exploring her agency (or lack thereof) within a patriarchal and war-torn world. This isn’t just about making her a victim, though. It’s about understanding how she becomes the object of male projections and how her choices are shaped by the impossible constraints placed on her [1-3].

Drawing inspiration from various sources, including the original play and critical analyses [4, 5], I’m particularly interested in:

  • Challenging the traditional narratives: I want to move beyond the simplistic ‘true Troilus, false Cressida’ dichotomy and unpack the societal forces that lead to her condemnation [6].
  • Exploring the idea of Cressida as a commodity: I want to highlight how she is treated as merchandise by men like Pandarus, and how her exchange between the Trojans and Greeks reduces her to an object of political and economic trade [7, 8].
  • Amplifying the voices of the marginalized: I aim to give voice to the women of Troy, including the chorus and the other refugee women, and offer a more nuanced perspective on the impact of war on women [9, 10].
  • Examining the cynical lens of the male gaze: Through characters like Ulysses and Thersites, I want to explore the destructive nature of male cynicism and how it shapes the narrative of the play [11-13].
  • Highlighting the human cost of war: This project is not just about Cressida. It’s about how war dehumanizes individuals and forces them into impossible situations, reflecting a “man-made horror in a godless world” [14-16]. I want the play to be relevant to modern audiences and invite discussion on the timeless themes.

Ultimately, my goal is to create a production that is both faithful to the original text and yet challenges its assumptions, offering a more complete and sympathetic portrayal of Cressida and the women in the play [17]. I am interested in the potential of staging this play with a modern lens, using visual and aural elements to highlight the timeless relevance of its themes [18, 19]. The stage will feature a debris-filled landscape and temporary shelters to emphasise the women’s vulnerability [19, 20]. It will explore the use of hatred as a tool of control [21]. It is a project about what can be ‘taken’ from the experience of the play [22]. I want the play to be an ‘open text’, and I want my production to reflect that.”

From the archives …

Dated February 2016 in photos … I believe this untitled photo piece is included in my first book of poems.

-ag

holiday poem 2024

I guess I forgot to title it.

I’m just glad it came together in time!

Happy Holy Days!

❄️

Side A
Side B

If I have your address you’ll get a card in the USPS mail.

xoxo

Ali 💋

If I’ve told you once, I’ve told you 1000 times …

I’ve written dozens of versions of this same advice to beginning screenwriters.

It takes reading a lot of scripts over many years to understand the form but here’s a tip I hope you can use now.

Every word of a script should convey valuable information. Writers hung up on facial choreography aren’t trusting the actors will know how to perform if given insights to character through specific behavior and choices. They forget to leave clues in description detail. They lose sight of the bigger picture while telling the actor how to time his exhalations. -ag

Counts as Writing

It’s coming … I promise you.

The first three episodes of The Ferment will be fully scripted (revisions pending further development, of course) by the end of winter break (before the Spring 25 semester).

And for as much as the recent election results suck in so many ways, I will use the dark emotions to fuel the art. Just like I do personally when painful feelings arise. I will make something out of this suffering, too. Perhaps you will join me?

We will make something of value out of the ongoing tragedy – because bad things have been happening and they will continue to happen. We pray they won’t escalate too quickly. We pray the country doesn’t veer too far off-course of Progress while we inject as much positive value into our communities as we can.

We will remain diligent- on watch for abuses of power, corruption, harm, and injustice. Over the weekend, I finally made a donation to the WVIA newsroom because I’m not sure where else independent journalists are working and democracy needs to protect them.

Who has the $10 billion that was spent on political campaign advertising this year?

How many Americans have been made anxious, distrusting, and ill from the bombardment of thought bombs falling for months on our global mind? Pennsylvania, at least, feels harassed and violated. Can some of that gross profit be used to fund independent journalism that cannot be controlled or regulated by the government?

If not, what can be done to put our nerves at ease? Uncertainty, they keep saying, it’s what fuels the fear.

Can we do something with campaign spending that benefits all of us? Can we engage in our communities- give back- generously nurture shared experiences- create opportunity for those without capital who given time and space will envision innovative solutions and writer better stories?

Anyway …

I’m working.

Doesn’t Count As Writing

But that doesn’t mean that it doesn’t count.

By it, I mean video. I’ve been taking advantage of summer outdoor adventures to practice cutting together videos of our hikes and cycling. I suppose there is some sense of visual storytelling. Some cinematic training of the mind?

I’ve learned GoPro AI is terrible at picking clips and the only way to use their app is to make your own edits. Some of the music is good, though and it’s nice to make highlight reels relatively quickly (without spending hours in Adobe).

Just in case you thought I forgot about my own creative work … I am still processing life and practicing the skills to share it. It just doesn’t look so much like script at the moment.

Patience.

-ag

Summer reading …

Memento Mori Mementos

More than an encore!

Maureen McGuigan’s Remember, You Must Die: a comedy is back this month as one of two solo plays performed by their author in the Scranton Fringe Festival summer mainstage production Acting Alone. The show will also feature Mandy Pennington’s new work Girl Walks Into A Movie Theater under the direction of Simone Daniel.

Although I’ve been working at Lackawanna College in Scranton for eight years as an adjunct professor in the humanities, the school has not had its own theatre program for a long time. Acting Alone will only be the second time I’ve staged a show in that gorgeous old theater. Fun fact: The first time was the second production of The Vagina Monologues we produced in Scranton (2003) to raise funds for the Women’s Resource Center and Domestic Violence Services Center. I got to act in that one (“My Angry Vagina”) and connecting with that packed house was exhilarating. When I complain about how much I don’t enjoy acting, I try to remember that show because it was a clear exception.

Back to the present.

Performances of Acting Alone are scheduled at 7 p.m. Thursday through Saturday, June 25-27. Masks are required at Thursday’s show. There will also be a 2 p.m. matinee on Saturday.

Tickets can be purchased NOW directly from ScrantonFringe. org.

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